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PostSubject: Kira Koga (WIP)   Tue Sep 01, 2009 9:05 pm

Name: Kira Koga

Gender: Male

Age: 22

Race: Nobody

Home World: Realm of Light

Appearance: (see Avatar)

Personality: Extremely social and may seem like a dope.

Elemental Mastery: (What element does your character have mastery over? They can have up to three, Primary, Secondary, and Tertiary.)

Weapons: I'm going to come up with my own design on a keyblade.

Fighting Style: He comes in close and fights with speed and accuracy. Before losing his heart he was not able to fully grasp his training with the sword.

Alignment: He's generally good. However, he follows his own set of rules.

Affinities: He's basically a ninja. He deceives people into thinking he's useless but, when it comes time to fight, he suddenly becomes a fighting machine.

Weaknesses: Morals and logic. He'd kill one for the many in a heartbeat, even if that one was King Mickey. He can't see very far into the future, choosing the solution that would temporarily fix the problem.

History: Before loosing his heart, Kira had taken lessons in the way of the sword. However, he had never been able to fully grasp the concepts he learned. He did good in school and had lots of friends. Until he graduated and his parents died. They had been shot by a mugger. They had just walked out of a movie theater after realizing that they had left all their money at home. The mugger didn't know that, nor did he care. Kira had been passing by when he happened upon the gruesome scene. he run to their dead corpses and collapsed onto his knees and began crying. His sorrow was replaced with anger and rage. He then spent all his time searching for the ones responsible. When he did he killed them. After wards, he didn't feel any better and his parents hadn't come back. He became so depressed that he eventually committed suicide and was turned into a nobody.

He remembers his swords lessons and the good times of his life but, he doesn't remember his parents or the last two years of his life that he spent hunting the muggers down.

Pictures: (Pictures are NOT mandatory, BUT they do help a great bit.)


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PostSubject: Re: Kira Koga (WIP)   Sat Sep 05, 2009 6:43 pm

please fill this out before we look at it

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PostSubject: Re: Kira Koga (WIP)   Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:59 pm

Just a few pointers, being a Work In Progress, you need to work as fast as possible, not trying to rush, posting a work in progress is usually not a great idea because for now it just takes up space.

I would say the history could do some fluffing, Appearance cannot simply be "look at avatar (e.g picture or google him." You need to state exactly what he looks like even if he is made up. You need to describe height, weight even, eye/hair color. Clothes he usually wears, his style of dressing.

Personality, simply can not be one line. Is he hyper at times, does it resort to violence quickly. What else does he do when alone, you need to elaborate.

Your weapon must say Key-blade, or type of weapon being Swords.

Elements are things such as Nothingness, Darkness, Water, Fire, etc. Tertiary is optional and useful. Though you lack experiance in it , it is useful.

I'd like to elaborate more on the fighting style, what does he do when the opportunity is near, does he strike to kill? Does he tire the enemy out and hope for victory.
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