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PostSubject: Surie   Surie Icon_minitimeMon Jul 20, 2009 12:45 am

Name: Surie

Gender: Female

Age: Unknown, looks like she's in her 20's

Race: Nobody

Home World: The World that Never Was

Appearance: Surie stands roughly 5 foot 8 inches. She has straight black hair that falls to just below her shoulders and green iris's. She has a fair complexion and wears the typical Organization XIII outfit; from the gloves and cloak to the boots.

Personality: Surie is rather quiet and rarely speaks a word to anyone that isn't close to her. She is very calm and rather easy to get along with if you can manage to get passed her personality shield she places up. She's very reserved when people are around. However, if she is around people she is close, to she is a bit more lively and talks more. When she is alone she enjoys her time by simply reading, writing, practicing her technique, and other little things to pass the time.

Elemental Mastery:
Primary- Darkness
Secondary- Fire
Tertiary- Light

Weapons: Blood Blade

Fighting Style: Prefers Close-range, however she can fight any.

Alignment: Neutral

Affinities: Truly knows how to use her elements and sword fighting with precision. Her reflexes are relatively fast which add on to her speed, although she rarely runs. She can be rather tricky to fight due to her ability to set up her opponents, trapping them and catching them off guard. She is intellectual as well and has been known to sometimes play mind games when needed. She prefers to be on defense and counter based upon the offense, however she will go on offense if necessary.

Weaknesses: If someone were to get close to her and know everything about her, that would be her greatest weakness. She doesn't always communicate well with others all the time; has troubling explaining what's on her mind. For instance, although she may care deeply, it can be difficult for her to show it. In battle, she sometimes has the tendency to show mercy. Her weak point is usually her back and although she's fast, she doesn't have a lot of physical strength and endurance. She can also have difficulty when other elements are used against her, depending on the element. Her pet peeve is long range, she prefers close range and has more difficulty in long range fights.





History:
Surie was always known as the odd ball nobody due to her name not having an 'x' in it with her original name jumbled up. Her original name was also no where near close to Surie. Long ago, before her death, she was known as Zyrie. Last name is unknown due to missing reports of Surie.

File #77XXY
Zyrie ____, daughter of Arios and Lela ____, was born in Hollow Bastion where her parents raised her. Around the age of 4, her parents where murdered by a mysterious enemy wearing all black. Soon after, Zyrie was taken to the hospital from shock and took weeks to recover from such an incident. Ever since, she's be analyzed and is rather silent. However, she shows no sign of remembering her parents and childhood from that point and back; believed that despite the shock she was to young.


Report Files- Zyrie to Surie Transformation

File #938GH2
Zyrie ____ lived in the world known as Hollow Bastion, a peaceful place with her friends Cloud, Yuffie, Leon, Aerith and others. Zyrie was trained for combat just like they had and even received her own blade named the 'Blood Blade'. Origins of the Blood Blade stated that it once came from a fallen hero, then was remade to where it would be stronger. Zyrie spent most of day, despite talking to her friends, reading, writing, and learning whatever she could about this world. Everyday she truly wondered if there was more out there and would always search for the secret, feeling there was more behind Hollow Bastion. Zyrie, being rather intellectual, had soon designed what was known as a 'Gummi Ship' with a man named Cid. They were astounded she had such an idea at the age of only 9. At first they believed she was crazy for having such an idea as 'other worlds'. However, construction continued despite this.

Missing File.

File #264F9K
Years passed and at the age of 12, the Gummi ship was finally almost complete thanks the help of everyone and their strong will. They soon learned of stories from ancient books about the other worlds and how they are divided by a mysterious barrier to keep them separated. Day and night, Surie would read these stories and try deciphering their odd text.

Missing File.

File #657AS1
The day of the Gummi Ship completion was a dark day. As they stepped away from the ship to marvel it, a storm quickly swept over Hollow Bastion's castle. Confusion soon rose after, especially when black beasts began rising out, later known as Heartless. These monsters swarmed the land and killed it's people. Zyrie and her comrades fought while Cid readied the ship for take off. They fought the heartless, finding whoever they could and placing them on the ship. However, the mission was a failure as everyone was wiped out due to them not being on guard from such creatures. Zyrie and her friends boarded the ship, Zyrie nearly being left behind. The travel, seeing as how the barriers were now gone and they found out Zyrie was truly right to begin with. They traveled by many worlds only to see the same thing occur and more Gummi ships rising up. Many days and nights passed and by then they had ran out of food and knew they needed to find a place to stay and inform others on what has occurred.

They soon came across Traverse Town and docked the ship there. As they left and entered the town, people began running out. A man grabbed on to Zyrie and pleaded they take him and leave. People pleaded, cried, and ran in terror but instead of running away, they burst into town and began destroying heartless right and left. The town rewarded them with food and homes, Cid even getting his own shop. Every day and night was a fight to survive as they destroyed heartless right and left. News of a hero who would wield the Key blade of legend soon rose from the depths. Most believed this was a myth and others prayed till the day this would happen. Zyrie acknowledged such a myth but focused more on what was now happening, the unlimited amounts of heartless.

Missing File.

File #A7XYY0
Zyrie was busy in the second district killing off heartless when a mysterious boy with an sword came out of nowhere and starting aiding her. Having some pride issues, she hit him hard in the chest and knocked him down before sheathing her blade and asking why he was there. He talked of how he was the key blade master, giving Zyrie and eye widener but she shook her head, not fully believing him. She said to prove it through a fight and they fought until Leon arrived and broke them up. Zyrie didn't speak of her opinions on if he was the key master or not. Leon and this key master soon fought as well, Leon winning and they took him back to the hotel they were staying at. Zyrie casually sat and rested against the wall until the boy, only appearing to be a year older then her, woke up. They soon began interrigating and found out he truly was the key blade master and that this peaceful place would soon be in trouble since the heartless were after him. This irritated Zyrie a bit and due to her wanting to protect this town she said she would join up with him to keep everything safe.


File #K2H995
From there the true adventure began as Zyrie and the key master, Sora, traveled around Traverse Town. More and more heartless appeared although they fought them off. A true test of their power and what caused Zyrie to become friends with Sora, was they went to the Third District and came across a huge heartless. One they haven't seen yet. Here, they also managed to run into two followers of King Mickey, Donal Duck and Goofy. The four of them fought together for the true first time and finally defeated the Heartless. When Leon and the others showed up, the walls the Heartless created were taken down. They talked of what occurred and soon decided they all join up and take the Gummi Ship King Mickey gave Donald and Goofy. Zyrie was sad to leave her friends and Gummi ship behind, but now she felt she truly was needed and decided to follow Sora till she saw she didn't need to.

File #587GHN
They traveled from world to world and they grew stronger. Zyrie learned how to truly fight and gained a lot of experience from all this, as well as learned to truly trust a human. She trusted Leon and them but treated them more as her parents and elders then a friend or sibling like she treated Sora. There was even a time her life was in danger and he even saved it. They were stuck in Monstro at this time and Sora had seen his friend Riku. Zyrie and Riku dueled for a while until Riku managed to catch her off guard and nearly dealt a deathly blow. However, Sora stepped in and defended Zyrie, giving Zyrie the time to counter. Riku escaped yet again and from then Zyrie grew a feeling of rivalry towards Riku and planned to defeat him one day in combat.

File #786NN1
From there they continued to travel in search of Sora's friends, Kairi and even Riku; sending them to more places. They searched for more keyholes as well and to save the worlds from the heartless. To Zyrie it was all like a giant puzzle but she helped Sora anyway she could, seeing as how she truly didn't have much to do anyway. All was going good until they reached Zyrie's old home, Hollow Bastion. From here, Zyrie truly wanted to investigate and defeat the heartless of her old home. Most of the evil so far seemed to reside here, a true problem for her. Upon arrival, Riku showed up once more and took the key blade from Sora. This left Sora torn up due to the fact he not only lost the blade, but more importantly his two friends Donald and Goofy. This left Zyrie enraged and she also left Sora, planning to hunt down Riku herself and take him out. She began to study once more, searching for something in the old books to tell of a way to truly rid these heartless and evil but found nothing. When she wasn't there she was hunting Riku and even found him, a fight beginning once more. However, this time she had to also fight Donald and Goofy. She was winning until she was pushed from the top of the Hollow Bastion stares and through some metal to the ground below. This left slashes on her back that caused her to have to retreat due to her injuries. Sora had spotted her and began fighting but ever since then she remained in hiding. Only coming out to defeat heartless in secret or research.

She continued this and watched over Sora and the others from the shadows as he fought Riku once more, and even transformed into a heartless. This hurt her but she wasn't about to step in yet, feeling something hold her back and hide her. She felt Sora would forgive her, but felt she wasn't ready to face him yet. She was ready to slay him if he ever caused damage but surprisingly it was Kairi who had saved him and defended him. This was one of the first times she saw such love shared between two people, making her happy. As she left the area, she ran into Ansem for the first time and began to attack him but he cast some sort of spell to freeze her in her place and make her listen to his words. He wanted her to follow him due to the revenge he saw in her heart but she never agreed and attempted to fight him, failing.

Missing File

File #0005F2
The last appearance of Zyrie was when Sora and Ansem fought. Zyrie appeared from the shadows and began to aid Sora, something nobody ever expected. The main thing was when Sora was about to take a deathly blow and Zyrie jumped in front, taking the blow. It sent her flying many feet back and as she tried to get up, she couldn't. Ansem appeared by her and taunted her, telling her of how she'll become a heartless who kills and maybe even more. Sora then attacked Ansem and the fight began again with more power, Sora's need to defend. The words seeped into her mind and she was relatively confused at the time, "and much more...", it never made sense. Blood continued to pour from the wound in her heart, however her will kept her alive until the fight was over. She asked Sora for forgiveness and was granted it. She heard their pleas for her to live and they tried healing her but she was beyond repair at that time. With her last dying breath she told Sora she'd protect him in the after life before being swarmed by darkness.

-Present
A new nobody arose from the depths, her name Surie. At first she was troubled with odd memories of her past. Hollow Bastian, a kid with brown hair, the key blade, it all bugged her but nothing made sense. From here she has been reserved and rarely talks to anyone she meets, which isn't very many people. She thus far doesn't have any friends and no matter who she tries to remember in her past, they all seemed to be dreams. She never understood her true purpose since "birth" and seeks it to this day. She fights any heartless that tries attacking her, which no many do, as she moves from world to world in seek of the truth behind her memories and who the brown haired boy is.


Pictures: Surie Surieinnormalclothes
Take her, take out her ribbons, make her hair shorter, give her the Organization XIII attire. Batta bing badda boom, you've got Surie.


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PostSubject: Re: Surie   Surie Icon_minitimeMon Jul 20, 2009 5:29 am

Well I am very impressed with this character. The detail is incredible. One problem though, could you put more in the weaknesses? What you put is fine, but you need to touch more on what she isn't good at during battle.
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PostSubject: Re: Surie   Surie Icon_minitimeMon Jul 20, 2009 7:11 pm

I added more to her weakness. Is it okay or shall I add more?
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PostSubject: Re: Surie   Surie Icon_minitimeTue Jul 21, 2009 7:12 am

That is excellent. Welcome to Kingdom Hearts Age, you are approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Surie   Surie Icon_minitimeTue Jul 21, 2009 6:36 pm

I couldn't agree more. Wowzerz Very Happy
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