Oren

Character Template

Name:oren

Gender: male

Age:16

Race:a human with special abilities 

Home World:The world that never was on the bad side or the city

Appearance:tan skin,long black hair,shinny green eyes, wears torn black pants and a purple coat with a white shirt and fingerless gloves doesn't wear shoes,he is average size but has musle 

Personality:He isn't a happy guy and not a big talker but when he meets someone that's not a jerk he'll have a conversation

Elemental Mastery: primary-rock/earth secondary-dark and cure

Weapons: spicky metal chian 

Fighting Style:Doesnt like to move around alot stays at a far range and waits to be attack and gets very offisve  

Alignment:he doesn't really know himself but secrtly likes to fight but only does it to protect others but with every fight he gets more dark

Affinities: he has great defence and takes pain very well  he can fist fight and likes to grapple 

Weaknesses: element water and gravity
Does not do well with fast enemies

History: never went to school he learned by observing forgot who his parents where they dead when he was young he has been tourted everyday or his life untill he started fighting for others. He hasn't been anywhere but his home. Daisy and him want to take over the castle and fix the city but Oren is slipping into the darkness with his love for fighting

Pictures: will post later I'm not a good artist

Ah....you'll need to improve on about everything here.

Here is an example to get started.

Sora's Profile

*sigh*

To make this official from a member of the staff, yes, you'll need to improve your description in all areas. This is an RP forum and the strength of your ability to describe things can heavily affect your ability to be understood by those you are working with.

Sora's can be a good one to look at as an example, as can be mine, or King Mickey's or even Riku's.

Just to provide a variety of examples.

Mrs. Grizzley